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for Feeling Lucky

by ramblingrobin

person Anonymous
schedule December 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great start! I love the interactions between Lucky and his canine friend, very well done. I hope you contiue it. I'd love to know what happens next

person Moku_Sui
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wondering when I can expect this to be updated? Thanks!
person wolfluv
schedule January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING THIS STORY! I'm wondering if Senna was a sex slave that the Valorins bread????? OOOO OOOO OO I HOPE LUCKY KEEPS HIM!!!!!! still reading I'm getting to the Kidd napping story soon I just gotta catch up with what you've written so far in the m/m category I'll check you and red out after!
person Tahn
schedule January 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope there isn't any more live cargo in the hold. Don't know how much more he could take.
person kait
schedule December 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, can't wait to read more! Do you have a mailing list?
person Thirdly
schedule December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks that the way he was "boxed up" was all sorts of fucked up. And clearly someone (or plural) tapped Senna's behind somewhere in the process. Oh oh oh! And I like that Lucero has a Medbay too, hee hee.

I'm sure Roki will be careful to not knock Senna over on purpose. I have faith in him. I'm actually pretty darn worried. If the Vortan was transporting Senna to someone, then I'm sure that the one who legitimately bought him is going to want to come searching for him...unless it was the Vortan himself who bought him.
person Moku_Sui
schedule December 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You're here! haha, so I had a day to digest your story. I definitely reread the second chapter this morning. I love your descriptions of Roku and that little tidbit about the head in the mouth to freak out a chick. Great stuff! Anyways, I'm curious to see how Lucky and Senna get over the language barrier. I'm not sure what kind of world they're in, but I'm assuming the tech should be good enough that there are live translation devices? That's just a thought. Update soon! I love this story so far!
person Thirdly
schedule December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu what was making him cry out like that!????? Dammit Robin!

I love this one. Takes a good sci-fi for me to enjoy, this one is it.
Love Lucento's personality. He's amazing.
Wondering who/what that person is and where he/she/it came from now.