As always another great chapter. I was wondering if you ever thought of doing a couple of Matt chapters? it seems we don't get much of him. maybe one of him at school or something similar?
I loved this chapter, thank you for updating so quickly.
I hope we'll get to see how the slaves adapt to their new life.
Thank you for the update, I really loved this chapter. A lot of Joseph, Victor and Troy, I can't ask for more !
And don't worry about the delay, your life is obviously your first priority.
Yeah Victor is back hope there will be more chapters with him and Joseph. Will there be any more chapters with Ryan would love to know how he is doing as a civi?
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Thank you for the great chapter. It's always a pleasure to see a new update.
I was practicaly sobbing when Troy called him kitten again. Hit me right in the feels. The paralells of their relationship with the slave's breaking through the whole last three chapters has made this arc one of the best reads, whether intentionally put there or not (But I hope their broken relationship can be fixed). I also noticed how much of a hold Salway still has on Troy and Joseph, despite how that particular character has barely made any physical appearences. Really cool how he terrorizes throughout the whole story, I had never really noticed before, but the character permeates every page, having been so involved with the development of other characters. Can't wait for the next update, Happy Writing!
Oh! I loved it! I can't wait for the next one, thanks for all the extra writing you did for this chapter!
Thank you for the new chapters! I really like this arc, and I still hope that Joseph and Troy will end up together.
Yay! Some more Joseph and Troy sexual tension! I can't get enough of their tortured interactions, and the way they seem to tip toe around each other now. This arc of the story looks awesome and I hope it breaks more than that poor slave. Whenever I read about Joseph and Troy I have this internal monologue saying "something's gotta give." I don't really know what it will look like now with Liam in the picture, but I hope those two end up together, genetics be damned.
This was a nail biting chapter for me. On one hand, maybe the healthy thing is for Joseph to get over Troy and for Troy to get over Joseph, on the other, THEY BELONG TOGETHER WTFGSHAGHAHAGAH! Troy's little delight in having a 'sex doll' disturbs me somewhat (but funny how nothing else in the story has lol) but I think it's just the part at the end when he starts comparing Joseph to Liam and how he seems to dehumanize Liam much more than he has with any other slave. Also, poor Joseph, poor, poor Joseph. I want to hug him, I want to give him his childhood back, and I want him to not be so destroyed by Liam's presence. Yet, I LOVE reading about it. You made him such a loveable character! If I could force you to write faster, I would. Thanks for the update!