Poor fox! I hope Nikko can take care of him and Bishop can have someone to love! Maybe with all the doctoring Bishop will be okay with him! Xoxo Robin
Ooooo I hate Kit. I know he was probably abused, but still! I love this story. It makes me happy when I see a new chapter! Xoxo Robin
Poor Bishop! Doggy needs loving! I have high hopes, I'm shipping Bishop and King so hard right now! I loved how King got him right talk about stars. Xoxo Robin
Enjoying your story so far, a nice way to end my weekend. I was also happy to see a bjd as your profile picture ^_^
He may have lost his solitude, but perhaps Bishop had gained a friend.
- My heart! That part was so beautiful. Bittersweet under the circumstances, but beautiful.
As for Yoshimasa Hosoya as King's voice actor, I stand behind that! It'd be perfect. His calm, gentle demeanor makes for a perfect roommate.
Poor Bishop. Just what are we gonna do with him? I want him to crush hard on someone other than Knight so very, very badly.
Yo~ I have been reading your story for a while now, and I don't think I ever got around to write a review for whatever reason, which I am terribly sorry for. I just wanted to let you know that I enjoy reading your story very much- the characters are fun, the fluff is real and everything is soo cute <3 Especially the last chapters with Bishop and King. Defo makes it up for what happened in previous chapters with Jack, Nikko's insecurities and gloom and with Kit being an insecure ambition driven little ass (sorry for the label, it's how I feel towards him, nothing against you writing him up to seem like that or anything ^^) I like your writing style and the depth you give to the characters, the pacing is nice, and the only thing I regret right now, is that I read the last chapter that is out xD Much love <3
OHMIGOD SENPAI NOTICED ME!!!
You are welcome for my comment! Thank YOU for writing this AMAZING story!! You have no idea how happy I am to find out that you update regularly! It would've broken me to be 57 chapters deep into a story and not know when the rest was coming. Now I can't wait till next Thusrday/Friday!
P.s. this chapter was awesome sauce. And I'm putting money on Bishop and King becoming mates soon (love the name btw! Was guessing it would be either that or Rook.) I think they're going to be adorable together <3 Bishop needs some intimate loving, what with all the rest of his family 'paired off'. And cause he has all of that pent up sexual tension :')
Love BobbleHats x
P.s. Have you thought about maybe uplaoding this to Wattpad or another more popular writing platform? I think this story could do so SO well with more exposure. It's tucked away here, not nearly enough people have the pleasure of meeting Nikko, Knight, Queen, Bishop & the rest of the baes. The world is missing out!
My mind was in a complete whirl as I read this chap. I was both super proud and super afraid for Nikko when he stood up to Kit like that. It was both glorious and frightening. I worry how this new student will come into play. Will he be a good fit? Hopefully he doesn't do anything to betray them. And just what are they gonna do when he won't heal properly by the end of the three month period? There's no way...unless Bishop tends to him all nurse-like, but even then! Also, King? I thought Nikko was the 'King.' Considering Pawns and Rooks are the only other options...I'd still have gone with Rook for him. Granted, Nikko didn't have much time and just blurted out the first chess piece he could think of that he hadn't used yet. Though he's an awful person, Kit is actually doing his job well...too cut-throat and conceited for anyone's taste, but he still pulled up the contract for Nikko and was quick to take the fox's previous owner to court. He called Jack privileged, which makes me wonder if he's always been caustically jealous of Jack for their two (Hunter and Michaela?) masters' attentions. Seriously, Kit, you would NOT want Hunter's real attention. As usual, I'm left wanting to read so much more!
OH! And have you ever thought to upload your stories on other places? If you toss me an email (yuurimaoh@gmail.com), I can give you a list and help you figure out how to post in the different ones.