They are so cute, but every chapter I get sad just waiting for it all to fall apart. It seems to be balancing on a knife's edge, and with one wrong move it will all tumble down. I hope there is a happy ending, I hope, I hope, I hope. Such cute and loving beings deserve happiness. But I do know that it is your story and the plot can only go where the muse takes it. I'll be here 'till the end, no matter what it is.
Aww that was sweet. And the texting is hilarious. Xoxo Robin
-snort- I loved the autocorrected messages from Knight. It was a very mature moment for Knight, to let the puppy return to her family. However, Nikko certainly panicked there when he dove into the water. He should really explain to his boys why water's such a touch subject with him (at least deep water, in any case).
This chapter was amazing! I lube how it's very clear what the perspective is without disrupting the for of the story by putting in headers simply saying that this chapter is about this character. Nice. I wish more people did this instead of writing a name at the top of the chapter.
I smash liked how yummy it was! Rawr! And I really like the characters and how three dimensional their personalities are. Good job. Xoxo Robin
It's good to see they are ok. I wonder if Nico can help them, or if he ever runs with Knight, if they can instead help him? Are they all really sterile? I hope Bishop finds happiness, I wonder if they can share Knight?
Yaaaaay we got more on Roco and Wendy! This was a really nice peek at how they're doing. I just really, really hope they don't get caught. Or, if they DO get caught, that they'll let them stay together.
What a wonderful chapter! I loved it. I feel so bad for bishop though. I wish he could get some knight love! Xoxo Robin
I wonder when Knight will figure out that he can't stay with him forever. If the little fox mates for life, what's that gonna do to him, being dragged away?
Ugh. Nikko and Knight are so cute I want to squeeze their faces. Poor Bishop, but the little guy showed a lot of maturity for someone only a few months old. Every time I see there's a new chapter I tell myself if I can wait a few weeks, I'll have a bunch of chapters to read! That never works. Loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Knight's going to freak out so bad if anyone dies. Again, poor Bishop caught in the middle. I don't care if he was the catalyst that finally got those two together, he's still an innocent bystander that shouldn't have been there in the first place. And, for some strange reason, I keep wanting to ship Bishop with Jack in my head. All these thoughts about not having the guts to run away makes me wonder what happened to Roco and Wendy. Hope they weren't caught.