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November 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Don’t stop there!!! I liked this one a lot. It had all the elements I like in a fan-fic.
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June 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! THAT WAS AWESOME! HEE HEE HAAAA I LOVED THE BEE'S ARE WHORES BIT... Oh and I'm sure I missed a couple but YEAH! That was awesome, Does the Gov know what she is by chance? Where is Dee being taken to? ALSO what's up with the key she gave him, also the heartguard does he know what Mr Weaver is??? OH and is Lil spider going to get that poleaxe I have some many questions!!!! Thank YOU for updating but I must say not that I'm complaining but you could have made at least two chapter out of this BUT hey if this how they are going to be I'M SOOOOO NOT COMPLAINING! Much LOVE!
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February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh my beautiful and talented Invidia! I have missed you so! I fucking looooove this story! If it didnt have your name on it I would still have known that it was one of yours! Its my favorite one im reading and im reading like 15 different stories at any given time! Thanks for sharing your talent with me again♥♥♥
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December 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wAnT mOrE. This is all good! I await the next chapter with baited breath.
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November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Plz update.
Rukia
Rukia
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November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my InvidiaRed! I loooove your stories! Cant wait for more...update soon please!
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November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhmmmm It's nice, but I didn't really get what's going on. I think you should try to ass more variety to the vocabulary you use, and instead of calling the characters only by their names, call them things that describe them like 'man, guard, keeper, magician, demon' or whatever fits the description of each individual character.
I think you should also add more scenery, when I say it I mean things like 'the wind was howling' or 'the silence was loud'- sentences like those would not only helpin making the chapters richer and longer, but would also give the story-line a realistic time line to go by (for the readers, mostly).
I'll continue to follow this story, it seems interesting and with a lot of potential.
I think you should also add more scenery, when I say it I mean things like 'the wind was howling' or 'the silence was loud'- sentences like those would not only helpin making the chapters richer and longer, but would also give the story-line a realistic time line to go by (for the readers, mostly).
I'll continue to follow this story, it seems interesting and with a lot of potential.