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I wonder what she is...

Hm. Could you clear up the confusion of the phrase "bean sidhe"? It simply gave me the mental image of a microscopic banshee... And I doubt that's accurate. I feel the change from wolf to man should have had more descriptive detail, as well as descriptions of the men themselves, which would have been perfectly timed, though I don't think that's the less important part. Also, I may have just missed or forgotten it in chapter one, but the detail of the heroine as black came as a surprise. I wonder now what all of the "mates" are ethnically. Simply put, few fanfiction authors make their stars black, as sad detail, but I'm quite pleased to see a break in the norm here.

Is it just me or are all fanfiction writers in college? Hehe. Now I find it interesting that the main character already has a love interest to rival her 3 soon-to-bes. I also look forward to seeing how the mates work her into their dinamic- should it already be established. Would they find and recognise her by accident, as a gay trio, or would they be aware of her since before meeting? The ideas and questions go on and on but I will end it here. Oh, and also, thank you for the reply.

Oo update!!! Bout time :-) lol jk!!! Wtf she alredy has a bf!? Omg her future mates r gonna flip ther SH*T!!! XD can't wait 2 c tem all fight 4 her... Hm. But if hunters a goodie 2 shoes hell probly call her sumthin mean & leave. O well she'll hav 3x the physical(&emotional) comforting!!! XD anywho!!! Plz PLZ plz update soon!!!
Rukia

This does not spell good times.

Oooh!!! Coolness!!! It's bin ages sins I read a multi-mate story!!! And this 1z got a great start!!! Can't wait 2 read mor, so plz update soon???
Rukia

Interesting. It definitely opens many opportunities for embracing different points of view, and makes for entertaining first or third person descriptions. I noticed the M/M tag. Does that mean the MCs mates are mates to each other as well? I look forward to finding out all the story shaping details. Please keep up the good work.

And then what happened?