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for Too Pretty

by RenStjerne

person wolfluv
schedule November 14, 2021 at 12:00 AM

You had me at lawyer for hair and boxer handling!  Just found this story and already the first chapter is great! Just wanted to let you know.

person Carissa
schedule April 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 is missing most of it.
person Tahn
schedule November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It kills me that the chapters are so short cuz I want more. It's interesting and I wanna know what happens.
person Tahn
schedule November 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Jeeze, a girl goes away for a coupla days and I get 10 chapters, awesome! Work it out guys!
person Girlygirl
schedule November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I can't wait to find out how Barbie explains who/what he is. Steven will probably need 2 weeks to think about that!!
person Tahn
schedule November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. Can't wait for more. I wonder how their first face to face is gonna go down. I'm also curious as to what Barbie is.
person Tahn
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think your chapter 9 and 10 are the same thing. Other than that, this is a cute story so far. Makes me curious for more.
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the story cannot wait to read more! Btw chapter 9 and 10 are the same.