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I'm so glad the boys got together after all they went through, and that Ven was so gentle with Hart. I'm going to miss these boys!

I actually feel a little sad for Lynch. No doubt feeling that unloved has turned him into the man he now is.

Oh! How is Hart going to process that? Will he realise he has feelings for Ven too, or will this drive a bigger wedge between them? Update soon!

Love the introduction of Corazon, he is the perfect peace offering and will help to bring the boys back together. Plus, I learnt something new, I didn't know corazon was Spanish for heart <3

Good ol' Ronnie! But I feel for Ven :( I hope he and Hart can repair their friendship.

Poor Hart, so broken and confused, and the guilt Ven is feeling although understandable is not justified, he needs to explain what happened! I feel so sad for them both, you've got to fix it! *wink wink* :D

oh boy, need to know how this resolves itself

Brothers?! Well, I didn't see that one coming! But you can't end it there, I need to know how the boys' relationship is affected and if Hart can find the strength to forgive Ven. Please! There is so much more for the boys to do and say. Pretty please, with sugar on top? :D

Poor Hart! Even though I had a feeling this was going to happen, it was still upsetting. I'm dying to know what Lynch gave Ven, and if it's permanent. Does he only lust after Hart, or will the change have more far reaching implications than that? I need to know! Looking forward to the next chapter. xx

Awww poor Hart! It isnt his friends fault though...he was drugged and he obviously feels bad but Hart seems to be really hurt. I cant wait for Hart to wake up and see his friends reaction to how bad he hurt him. Talk about a broken heart...could you imagine!?! This Lynch character is an evil bastard and im sure it was hard to write but I like how fucked up he is and he got his point across without having to lift a finger. Smart vilian! And the fact it was hard for you to write means you arent a monster! You are really showing your talent when even though a scene is hard for you to write...not only do you make it happen anyway because thats what the story called for...but you did a damn good job! Im not an expert. I just know what i like to read and i will be waiting for this to continue! Keep up the amazing work and update soon please♥

Great start! I love it, and I just know the next chapter is going to be full of angst, which as you know, I LOVE! Once again you've come up with original characters that I know are going to capture my heart. Awesome job, my friend, well done xx