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Oh man...I know this sounds terrible, but part of me really wants Tian to at least attempt suicide somewhere in this plot to really shake up Xander

I hope they work out their differences, and he quits seeing him as a slave. I know he said he could never love him, but I'm a romantic at heart and hope that's not true.

Definitely enjoyed this chapter better than the last. And delvimng a bit n2 tians history was nice. As 4 te rant that was my last review, thanx 4 bothering 2 read & reply, & I truly hope u CAN read those 2 fics I mentioned as they r a full of my faves(& both master/slave M/M romances that I find ideal 4 how that can work out wonderfully). But then my tastes r extremely eclectic & sumti!es downrite random, so any new twist could hav me laughing or crying. Looking 4ward 2 the next update, keep up the awesum work!!!
Rukia

Wow did I get slapt wen I reread my review after sending it... Sooo many typos!!!!! Sorry!!! I assure u I hav an amazing vocabulary, but it always goes on an ecstasy binge when I'm typing... Sigh. Also, moku-suis comment would b what I would count as 1 of those large scale events, but considering the generals actions 2ward the kalitropians & allowing tians say n the matter, it no longer seems the best choice
Rukia

I've read a few of your stories and I really like them. I also like that you may be one of very few writers that actually complete their stories. I very much appreciate that. I'm also looking forward to learning more about Tian and his new life. Not a huge fan of slave fics because I really hate people like Xander. But I trust you!

Really good story!!!!

You've caught my attention. This feels like a mature, well planned story. If there were more chapters, I'd still be reading them. Please update.

Not good, ouch.

Well ther is obviously somethin bout the idea of a functional master slave story that keeps me readin. Lol. Can't help but feel that if a man really did love his slave, he would free them & let the slave decide of its own free will wether or not 2 stay or leave. Even n such stories like this, wen the slave is considerd a spoil of war, a good man would afford them the opportunity 2 earn their freedom n sum way... The only way I can c this realistically workin out is a large scale event, either leveling their statuses, or causing the master 2 trully empathise w his slave. Of course, all plots hav an exception or 2. Such as n the story 'tears of the neko', the slave was 2 traumatised 2 function ndependatly, & n 'blood red', the slave had bin raised n captivity & feard freedom would equal death. Both r good stories & I hope u could read them & understand wer I'm cumin from. Ther both easily found on this site. Plz update soon, & I hope 2 read ur thots on the subject
Rukia

Well I do like this story, & can't wait 2 read mor, I find it a bit of an ideocyncracy that the general can simultaneously hav empathy 4 children/ppl that care 4 children, and yet hav almost conflictless tolerance 4 a commander that would willingly burn multiple children alive 8-( which I find highly disturbing. I hav read multipl slave/master romances & always come up w the paradox of it being impossible 2 luv sum1 & willingly depriving them of human rites... But that's just my opinion. Looking 4word 2 te nxt update.
Rukia