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Ah. Well the intension is simply 2 share ideas, not alter the story. I'm glad u didn't just roll ur eyes & reply 'u dumba$$ b*tch, its MY story'. Lol. Maybe all of it can simply fuel info 4 future stories(???;)???). Xamder is simply becoming mor of an anomaly 2 me. Could it b simply that he has never given the issue of slavery being immoral wrong??? It seems farfetchd 2 b that oblivious but I feel may actually b possible n this story. If that is the case, how deep does it run & 2 what other subject cts does it pertain 2... I wonder what would happen if Xanders son bonded w Tian, & how that would effect Xander feeling he needs 2 treat him. I can't wait 4 sum answers!!! Plz update soon!!!
Rukia

Aww, I hope it doesn't turn to animosity between slaves.

UGH, that's disgusting. I agree with Tian that Darnubis was too young for that shit at that age. He was just a kid. How would Xander feel about a man just taking his thirteen year old son and fucking him without asking for his consent? Man, that just left a bad taste in my mouth as soon as I read it. On top of slavery, this country is cool with child abuse too I suppose. Do slaves have any right at all? I thought I could warm up to Xander but he's quickly becoming a villain in my eyes. Great chapter tho. I hope Tian can help start a revolution. Kind of like Daenerys Targaryen in Game of Thrones!

Oooo coolness!!! Yeah I didnt c the pedo streek n xander X-P. & as 4 those other stories I named, I just wanted 2 point out the few examples n which a master/slave romance would last long term ideally. As u read, n BR the slave eventually became a freeman anyway. As 4 TotN, I dunno what the hek the author did 2 it :-( I read the whole story as they rote it, but when I went 2 reread it recently, POOF!!! 3 quateres of it wer gon & only a lil bonus chap on the end stayed after ch.3 8'-(
Now. Poor tian!!! Stuk n a houseful of free ppl that got no concept of life w out slaves, & slaves w no concept of freedom. To b fair, I got a few good pointers if u wanna listen 2 me a lil mor??? 4 starters, tian shouldn't start his revolution w shoreslaves at all. Most r likely 2 content w ther leisurely role. The slaves that do hard labor, who r mor than likely ill at ease w ther lack of control of ther rewards & punishments would b best, or, if u deem they exist n this story, then I would choose slaves kept 4 bloodsport, just as n BR, as they would sooner die by trying 2 gain freedom than being a spectacl. Nxt r the slaves that simply havnt bin slaves LONG. They would remember & miss freedom like Tian. They would probably rebel fastest, but would need control & direction. Lastly, n the tru spirit of utter rebellion & chaos, all the types of slaves I named n my other review. Medics, messengers, soldiers, caretakers, pharmacists, farmers, miners, entertainers(actors, singers, dancers, jesters), the old & discarded slaves(they often get 4gotn by the authors), weavers, fishers, hunters, builders, metal smiths!!! List is ongoing of what a single range of slave is capable of: crippling a country, & all they hav 2 do is NOTHING. Get it??? Simply a large nuf group could topl a fragile structure, & all society is fragile. OK im dun!!!Plz don't b mad & reply & update!!!

I wonder if that offer of friendship will stay open for long.

I really like this new story of yours!!! Sorry I only saw the post this week but i was busy!!! I'm glad I found it though!!!! See you again on monday!!!

It must suck to be hated from both sides. I wonder if he can actually cause changes in their old systems.

This story is wonderful, I love how it's going so far. Will it be mpreg

Dang xander keeps digging his grave deeper. I wonder how itll effect him wen he finally empathizes w sum1 who's not a citizen of his own country, & how hard his actions will hit him. Needless 2 say, it'll b ruff if he's gonna learn any lessons at all. And another thing: masters hand their slaves weapons ALL the TIME. Just 4 ideas: kitchen slaves, hav access 2 knives, poisons, & foods that will make their masters sik/hav allergic reactions; labpor slaves can criple an economy w a welltimed & large enuf strike. Messenger slaves can cut off entire armies from communications, medical slaves can ensure important persons will never recover from illness or injuries while n their care, entertainment slaves can use multiple types of subterfuge 2 pass messages 2 other slaves &or confuse info 2 masters... I hope that can b a big help!!!!! I figure a country of slaves outranking free persons would hav them n almost every role, & that makes all of the ideas deliciously plausible!!! Plz update soon, & get back 2 !e on what u thot of Blood Red, & Tears of the Neko???
Rukia

So, is this a steampunk type of universe? I'm trying to imagine the levels of tech here. What kind of weapons do they fight with, for example?

This quote: "Your eyes are red-rimmed. I do not enjoy seeing you so stressed. Especially when I am not the cause." It pissed me off. This is why slave fiction can be anger-inducing. Is Xander basically saying that it's okay if Tian is upset so long as Xander is the cause...? I'm also curious about how many other "whoreslaves" Xander has. And what his son thinks about them. And his wife. Does he have a wife?

REVOLUTION. I want to see that happen.