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for Serenity

by Sweetsong22

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
O finally sum significant progress!!! Hallelujah!!! Consort!?! That's almost as good as SPOUSE!!! XD omg!!!!! And Tian & Xander can work 2GETHER 2 change the kingdom!!!!! Oh I had SUCH am eyegasm reason that!!! Can't WAIT 2 read the nxt 1!!! Plz update sooner!!!
Rukia
person Tahn
schedule December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope Dar won't be upset
person Tahn
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope Xander doesn't start treating him badly now.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The drums of war r beginning a lively tempo I assume. Perhaps Cancer will finally start 2 wake up 2 how disturbingly twisted his country is. And just MAYBE, he could start 2 think of ways 2 try to CHANGE it. A man that good at strategy has 2 b able 2 do sum serious overhaul... Can't WAIT 2 read mor. Plz update soon!!! Love,
Rukia
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Xander. Xander. Xan. Der. JEEZE I hate autocorrect!!! Not cancer!!! Xander!!! Waaa it sucks reviewing on this thing X'-(
Rukia
person zas
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful, you so very talented at writing. Omg I wonder what will happen next. I like that you update when you said you will.
person Sara
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your story is a complete stockholm syndrom. I don't know what's interesting about this stupid phenomenon. Any way u should mention it in the tags or at the first chapter.
person Lavi1443
schedule November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice development! I wished the carachters would have been less nice and honest and all of that, but thats just my personal taste. Happy holidays!
person Tahn
schedule November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Cliffhanger!
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh neat!!! So much 4 my 1st thot!!! Now we c darnubis' POV!!!! :-) coolness!!! Tho... Tian simply doesn't seem like the type 2 b able 2 perform when he's not comfortable, such as w voyerism... I'll wait 2 c how it developed 2 the party tho. And Darn has a female love interest!?!? That doesn't seem plausible... Unless she is a dear friend, or relative from b4 he came 2 live w Cancer??? I can't wait 2 find out!!! Plz update soon!!!
Rukia