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Eek! Come on, you can take him!

Hm. That's a lot of action in a short time. Is the assassin really tat strong, or did he have luck on his side? Because if Tian is capable of remaining on par with Xander, an average man could only take him down with sheer luck. I do certainly hope the assassination attempt has more than a little effect on both Xander and Jenan. As for the on, I hope it takes his already overgrown pride back down to a 14 year-olds level, and finally gives him so!e true respect and admiration of Tian. It would be humorous if Jenan were to find out Tians former status as a rebel leader and the boy ask the slave to teach him some fighting or tactitional techniques. As for Xander, I certainly hope this abets any thought of condemning Tian, as such an action would be the ultimate act of ungratefulness. After all, a whoreslave would never be expected to fight nearly certain death for their masters. Perhaps an added perk would be genuine acceptance from Narciso. I look forward to more.

This was an awesome update. I am really enjoying the direction this story is heading. I look forward to your next update.

This was an awesome update. I am really enjoying the direction this story is heading. I look forward to your next update.

These plot points are amazing

Oh my god....

Oh no. Did the evil owner order his own former slaves killd!?! If so, r they ded, or injurd??? How many & how many witnesses???
No shipment of slaves would possibly go unguardd, so the escort/guards had 2 b killd/subdued b4 the slaves! If the slaves had already bin sold, that means he kills/destroyed another's private property on multiple counts!!! Plz PLZ PLZ tell me that comes w a heavy penalty!!! Or at the very least Xander will make him pay DEARLY!!! Gaaah!!!!
Plz update soon!!!!!!
Rukia

Well, that was depressing. Maybe there's still hope one is still alive? The fallout from this will be baaaaad.

Oh no! Gunned down as in dead, or just shot at? If his sister dies, bad bad things are going to happen.

Omg that's a lot of things to take in at once, can't wait to read more