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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Deep and sad and very moving. Well done.
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow . What a haunting piece . It makes me sad at first ,but then the ending is great. It makes me think of someone who , is or has been hurt and then they go on and overcome their pain . Very beautiful , I thought it was great. Reading this makes a person overcome their adversity . I don't know what inspired you to write this ,but I said , it was haunting .
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read it and just finished rereading it . I loved it so much I just had to review again . It made me think of a phoenix , a beautiful bird of rebirth .