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I hope that isn't the end of this! I'm really liking this story so far! It reminds me of the Giver! Is malexmale sex normal for the outliers? It certainly seems so with the way his mother hints about it!

I loved the update so much! They're both so adorable, I'm in love. Keep up the good work you guys ;0;

Whew! That was an intense one! I just really want Cian to leave with Atticus and see how amazing and scary the real world is! Scary in a good way...and if they ever get to go further than kissing...Gods help that boy! Hes gonna go crazy from sensory overload! Also in a good way! You 2 are doing a great job. Cant wait for an update♥

Well yaaaaaaaaaaaay for Xander too! You work well together:) I cant wait for the next chapter because I wanna know what happened to Cian...I have an idea...I hope im wrong. ♥

This is really interessting^^ Can't wait to see what cian thinks of this conversation!!! See you again soon!!!

I love your wonderful, creative characters in a dystopian setting. I hope Cian makes it out with Atticus.

I'm in love with this! I love the lore and concept, and how different the communities are. And of course I love both of the characters. I'm so excited for more.

Any chance you could finish one of the other five stories that people are waiting to see the end of, before you start another new story?

Oh my goodness I loooooove your stories!!! And this one is not any different...its off to an amazing start. I cant wait to see where this adventure takes us...but with your imagination im sure it will NOT disappoint. Im really excited to see what is going to happen with these two. Oh! And im really hoping Cian wasn't made in a petri dish after all...maybe they find out he was taken from the Outliers as a newborn to be studied or some crazy shit like that! AND what the fuck did they do to the water? It cant be good. Well im gonna have to wait and see! So update soon please cause I already love it♥

Interesting start!!! I'd like to read more of this!!!