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for This Story Is About Cindy Part 1

by Robert_Shnin

person vespyr
schedule September 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

please continue your work. the starting is amazing. full of emotions. one thing's for sure. a lot of us are waiting for your updates. 

person Top
schedule May 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I keep coming back to this story, hoping it is updated. To my chagrin, it never is. So, I decided that I would come down and give it a review, and maybe inspire you to continue it. I love the characters, you've done a good job of writing their personalities. I feel sympathy for the hero of the story, and I loathe all the villains of the story. That may not be much a review, but trust me when I say it takes a lot to get me to feel any emotion for characters, especially in written stories. I do hope you continue this story, I look forward to reading more of it.