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October 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Really am enjoying the lead up to the doing more. I can feel the love between the two sisters.
There were some sight typos but not enough for it to cause a problem reading the story. Even a spell checker would not find them because they were correct words just used wrong. Used of instead of off for reoving clothes items. Other than that great story and will be waiting for more or the story.
There were some sight typos but not enough for it to cause a problem reading the story. Even a spell checker would not find them because they were correct words just used wrong. Used of instead of off for reoving clothes items. Other than that great story and will be waiting for more or the story.
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October 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. Let's have more.
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