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for Kidnapping is Always an Option

by HinderToyBL

person Tahn
schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I do wonder though...who is he writing to?
person IEatCereal
schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was honestly kind of shocked to see a new chapter so soon, you guys really made a boring morning lecture enjoyable XD. Thanks so much guys <3 Thanks btw for giving us a great caspin/aden sex scene. To be honest the other reason I asked for a scene for just the two of them was because as much as I like the sex scenes, I'm a sucker for tender moments and its always nice to see how much the crew care for one another. So as much as I really want to see everyone having more sex I like all the cues you've written into the story that this is very much a permanent situation for everyone. I'm definitely hoping that Phennar will bag his mousey and get to experience topping for the first time. On an unrelated note how exactly would Rios play with them in his moth form? Advanced technology has also however made aliens lazy :P. Anal stretching sounds so easy with advanced technology T_T Thanks again for this sweet and smutty story
person IEatCereal
schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
[ * Aaand since aff ate the rest of my review with nice spaces I'll post the rest without any spaces].To be honest as much as I love all the sex scenes its the tender moments I like the most, and so its always nice to see all the cues you've written into the story that show that while it may not exactly be love for some of them (yet?), and even though this is a sugary lighthearted story, this is something that'll end up being permanent beyond just Cas and Aden. Its still nice to see some tender and smutty moments between the two original guys though. I know that given how Nix is biologically/personally, he's probably responsible for inititating/inspiring a lot of the on page sex scenes but don't forget about the others. Humans, foxes and bunnies need love too :P . I am however hoping that Phennar gets to keep his mousey and then gets to experience topping for the first time XD. On an unrelated note how exactly would Rios play with them in his animal form? How much can a moth actually do? Also I wish we had the technology to make anal stretching that easy. Seriously though thanks so much for this chapter guys XD. I'd hug you if I could
person Tahn
schedule February 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see the little mousy running around with the rest of the guys in their animal form.
person IEatCereal
schedule February 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this lighthearted story so far, thanks so much for this guys. For chapter 11 I'm going to go with: the fiance/her family/a jealous lover and or his family arranged the slavers visit :p. On an unrelated note could we have more Adrian and Caspin scenes (with just themselves or any combination of others)please ? These days I get the feeling that a lot of their sex and bonding time is off page and I'm missing them :P
person Nbsiren
schedule February 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
lol...bet they'll remember to lock the door from now on :P
person Tahn
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Aww, kitty. Can he become a cat like the bunny and fox?
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well. DAMN!!! It seems that w only a full of chapters this story's gon from a sweet romance 2 a literary orgy(literally). I can't c many mor characters appearing w out the plot slipping away completely anyway.
Now as for the 2 newest extraterestrials, might & kitty:
Due 2 Rios past I can't help but wonder what medbay would find w him, considering he's the only 1 not having gotten a checkup, lol. It'd b funny if Nix wermnt the only breeder. But since he hasn't mentiond heat his would hav 2 b much rarer or require certain conditions.
As 4 kitty Nixy himself, if whatever he applied 2 his eye & tail r ment 2xplain why they won't heal, the same doesn't imply his uterus didn't grow bak. That would b interesting, should Rios or Adrien get him pregnant!!! Imagine if he had twins, 1 from each... Or had a hole litter from each of the other characters... Yum :-)
And lastly: I wonder who jackoff is, and if we'll encounter him/her, or if it's just a name Rios gave 2 his digital library. Eithers quite plausible.
Can't wait 2 read mor!!!
Rukia
person Tahn
schedule January 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh, there's a new crew member. They are gonna have their own harem soon:D
person Tahn
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Glad Cas's family accepted him as his mate.