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for Not a Threat

by SenkuUzumaki16

person Tahn
schedule September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was hot, but what about the other little brother? And is the queen their "mother?"
person Semaya
schedule September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! I see what you're doing with that last section :) and I'm glad Lex and Kristof finally got together! Beliel isn't going to get raped at school is he??
Also in the beginning of chapter three you accidentally called Lex Alex a couple of times.
schedule September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The twist with the Tis king was great. Can't wait for more!
person Tahn
schedule September 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think the kitties are in heat and have birthing parts. I wonder if all of the species do, or just certain ones?
schedule September 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! I'm really enjoying it. I hate that doctor. I want the boys to be happy! Poor babies. Xoxo Robin
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That a$$hole!!! As the legal guardian he has a rite 2 full did closure & can demand it or demand a different physician!!! Plz let this turn out well!!! And plz update again soon!!!
Rukia
person Tahn
schedule September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, he's not really dead is he???
person Semaya
schedule September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! You actually had me crying in that second chapter. I'm very curious to see what happens next. I'm worried about Beliel some since he's not as close to Kristof as Lex is. Please update soon!
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaay... Was Reginald just n shock or was he actually n2 that stuff??? Weird... Anyway poor kids!!! Beliel needs a sweetheart n the WORST WAY!!! I wonder if he remembers somethings from his homeworld that effected his personality. Gyaaa the possibilities hav my head spinning!!! Plz update soon
Rukia
person Moku_Sui
schedule September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't see this coming. So Kris is the new main character then? I wonder what happened to Regi. I'm also a little freaked out about what's going to happen to the kittens...