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October 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The update was so short! I want to read more...but yeah.
So happy to see Belial reunite with his 'Jaja'.
And freaking Prince of Tiz did not even struggle to retrieve Belial. (tbh, I can't wait for this pair to mate)
So happy to see Belial reunite with his 'Jaja'.
And freaking Prince of Tiz did not even struggle to retrieve Belial. (tbh, I can't wait for this pair to mate)
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October 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I sense some misunderstandings about to happen.
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October 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That selfish little wolf should die screaming after being rejected in the most painful way possible, nothing he could do will ever make up for the suffering his little obsession caused. I can almost read his greeting already: "Hello, you belong to me, I killed your father, tortured both your mother and adoptive father, massacre'd and enslaved your people, but I love you, kiss?"
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October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read when beliel met bhaveen
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October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, but ill he like the mate he finds, and what will happen when he finds out that his planet was destroyed because of him?
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October 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Every time I see an update I get so excited! I can't wait until Bhavin finds Belial. Wonder how Belial would feel to know that his mate was partially responsible for the war of the two planets.
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October 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise of this story! I like the different races on different planets interacting and the reactions of the humans to the children of the new race. They're mixed like human reactions would be. This is set up to be a very involved story so I'm curious as to how this story will play out from here!
On the other hand, Bahvin and his family almost literally destroyed an entire race because they were protecting Beliel. That and, even if it was only once, Bahvin tortured Zellaro. I'm INCREDIBLY unhappy with him and it's going to take A LOT of work to convince me that he should be happy and get a happy ending. Torturing your mate's parent is a horrible way to woo someone and I really think he has to make serious amends for that and for what he's done to Beliel's ENTIRE RACE before Beliel should even LIKE him, let alone mate. I want Beliel to be afraid of and angry at this man who has been holding his mother captive. Even though he was nicer than he could have been to a captive, it doesn't clear him or absolve him of anything. No matter his justifications, Bahvin is a horrible person and I hope this story treats him as such.
I eagerly await your next update!
On the other hand, Bahvin and his family almost literally destroyed an entire race because they were protecting Beliel. That and, even if it was only once, Bahvin tortured Zellaro. I'm INCREDIBLY unhappy with him and it's going to take A LOT of work to convince me that he should be happy and get a happy ending. Torturing your mate's parent is a horrible way to woo someone and I really think he has to make serious amends for that and for what he's done to Beliel's ENTIRE RACE before Beliel should even LIKE him, let alone mate. I want Beliel to be afraid of and angry at this man who has been holding his mother captive. Even though he was nicer than he could have been to a captive, it doesn't clear him or absolve him of anything. No matter his justifications, Bahvin is a horrible person and I hope this story treats him as such.
I eagerly await your next update!
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September 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events.
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September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Er, what's going on? Interesting
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September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I knew it!!! I knew Richard wasn't dead and the boy's Lan is still alive too!! and with Richard. What is that evil man looking for? Is he after one of the twins??? Hope it isn't Lex cause he's gonna be pregnant. LOL More please?