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Such a wonderful story! and I hope things are as well as they can be for you.

Really interested to see where this story is going. Best wishes and my sincerest condolences on your recent losses.

My condolences for what you are going through. Thank you for updating during your time of grief. I wish you and your family well, my thoughts are with you.

Awwz! A baby!!!

I hope this doesn't lead to war.

Again something very touching and so funny.
But everytime I read about Beliel and Bahvin I have to listen to this special song: http://sta.sh/0pkrwoahsbe
wolfsnight
It's telling about the spirits of the moon and the stars, visiting the world once in a few hundret years in animals or human shape.
At beginning Yamila appears as a white lynx and meet a stormwolf.
They fall in love at first sight and hunt all night long.
During daytime she sleeps at his side and he's watching her.
At the evening she have to return to the sky.
Seeing her becoming a star again hurt him deeply.

I have to translate this for you, because it's german and a close friend playing the harp and singing.
Hope you enjoy it as much as I did!
If you post the next chapter and say if you liked the song, I can translate the end of the story for you!
Illien

I really love this story and NOT exclusive from the adult part.
You just let us take a dip into ya characters everyday life/more or less/ and show how they are!
It's just a great stile!
Really would like to read more!
Greetings
Illien

But what's going on with his brother, and what's gonna happen when two angry men come looking for their captured kin?

That's so sad though about losing the planet. All that destruction for what?

I have a question: couldn't the wolf prince have been left on Rania to grow up with Belial? I mean it's not like he can touch his own parents anyways since it would just cause him pain. To me it would have made more sense than causing a great gigantic war which kills a lot of people. I also would not force another set of parents from a completely different species to give up their own crown prince just for my beliefs. I know there is the biological factor involved but all they had to do was allow their son to stay on Rania and be raised with Belial. I'm betting if this had happened then Belial would have eventually left Rania with the wolf prince of his own free will. It's not like the wolf prince's parents can't call up their son or visit on a regular basis. Also, when the wolves decided to be helpful to the Ranians and take them to Tiz did the wolves give them their own land? I hope this is the case, otherwise the Ranians are just servants to the wolves now. What the wolves have cost the Ranians is probably way more than what the Ranians have been compensated for. Another question is did the wolf prince actually try to stop the war? I know he was just a child when it started but did he even protest it? Otherwise, I'll have to say that he is the only character I don't like. I really like Belial and his family, though. Hope Belial and his brother reunite soon.