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for Karma

by stein1914

person Lola
schedule October 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, i hope they will come soon together. Please do Not abandon this.
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope Henry's still alive! wow, Geoffrey's ten years older than him? Doesn't matter. Wolfgan definitely needs to tame his behind. He went and walked right into the lion's dean.
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I want wolfgan to jump Geoffrey sooooo bad. Argh. Xoxo Robin
person Lola
schedule September 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I liked it very much. Please continue this.
person Poohkie87
schedule September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the start. I'm just wondering about the POV since it feels like *from the summary* that this is from Geoffrey's POV. please update soon
person Tahn
schedule September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awww, why'd you hafta kill Henry? Or maybe he's not dead? I hope he's not dead. I sense much drama heading the Prince's way :D His warlord seems a might stubborn.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dont kill off HENRY DX!!!!!! I can't stand sad stuff like that, I was SO ATTACHED 2 him!!! Plz update soon!!!
Rukia
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh & I see this time around ur going w the hullian or a dual point of view(if we r 2 read it from Geoffreys pov as well as wolfgans). Also I like that this time u made the love interest a great bit more aware than poor Henry was. But truly, plz don't build him up n 1 story just 2 kill him 1st thing n the sexual!!!
Rukia