rate_review Reviews

Really liking this story so far. Small note for improvement: you seem to have some struggles with the past tense.Mostly irreggular verbs and double pasts. He throwed - he threw. Didn't had - didn't have Other than that it is very readable.

Holy hell that was so hot. Im gonna need some more of that action. I feel so sad for Geoffrey...obviously he enjoyed what Wolfgan was doing but he was raised that it was wrong and dirty. I just cant wait until he realizes how amazing his life can be with his Wolfgan! More more and more please! ♥

OH come on, Geoffrey...you'll still have heirs! He needs to stop beating himself up about his own feelings. I hope Wolfgan does sleep with Geoffrey every night! You can't win them all, Geoffrey. Ha ha ha.

One would think Geoffrey would accept Wolfgan at to make the best of the situation he's now stuk n 4 the rest of his life! Poor idiot could at least try 2 find some contentment!!! Plz update soon Rukia

Finally! We get to know a little more about Henry's disappearance. Hopefully they are able to find him. Geoffrey is so stubborn. He needs to settle down and give Wolfgan a chance. I can't wait to read more.

Yay!!! I love this story! I don't really care about any grammar mistakes, since I fully understand what you're trying to say. And personally, I think it's great that you're writing a story in a foreign language! I wouldn't be able to

I read Frost and enjoyed it and didn't realize Karma was the continuation until I started recognizing names and reread the blurbs. I really like Karma so far however there are some spelling errors that make reading it difficult so I would suggest a proof reader if English isn't your first language. also there is such a large time leap, it would be good to have a prologue or something bridging the time between Frost and Karma. We didn't meet all the characters in Karma in Frost so we are not quite sure who is currently ruling which character and who is of the same generation as Henry or his father Lord Jeremy.

Ah its bin so long I'd thot ud 4gotten us readers!!! XD I àm so happy theyr finally marrying, that means(hopefully) hot honeymoon sex n the near future!!!
Plz update again soon & faster
Rukia

This is so good! Can't wait for more!

wow, Ihope you write more soon