Really enjoyed the story. Thank you for sharing it. Xoxo Robin
Wow! I just finished both Frost and Karma. They were very good. I throughly enjoyed them. And considering you are not a native English speaker, you did a phenomenal job.
I was a little concerned when Frost ended without a real ending but had the feeling it would all be explained in Karma and it was.
With Karma, I would recommend fleshing out or going into more detail for some things. We know Geoffrey was there before but not much about what happened between him and Wolfgang. In a couple of scenes you made it seem like they had a romantic relationship. One time it was even mentioned that he locked him on the room before the wedding so he couldn't escape like before. What happened before? That would have been a good time for a flash back. Or even if you started the story from Geoffrey's first visit. Did they almost get married before? Also, I would have liked to have Geoffrey explain to Wolfgang what happened between his father and him and why his brother and he left. I also would have loved a few scenes where Henry and Heomath get cuddly and sweet after being away so long. Just some suggestions, I hope they help.
Fantastic job! Thank you for this treat. It was very enjoyable and creative. I love the idea of tall, built, warriors, mmmm. And pair them with willowy Elves? Golden. 😉
Take your time with the new story! Your endings are just fine as they are. I don't feel like they're rushed. I do enjoy Epilogues, however, so you might want to think of an Epilogue when you work on your Wild Rose tale. This one does feel like it has come around full circle. It started with Geoffrey and Wolfgan and ended with Geoffrey and Wolfgan. However, I would have liked to see a little bit more of Henry and Haomath doing something together (whether alone as a couple or with the entire family), especially after Henry was finally brought back. Poor Haomath was so distraught without him, after all. Overall, it was still a great story and I absolutely loved it! I'm also eager to read Wild Rose in a couple of months!
No, this is perfect!! Wolfgan loves him so much, he's letting him go. I just hope it won't be TOO long before Geoffrey decides to come back home to him. I can't wait to read more. My favorite part out of this chapter was when Wolfgan and Haomath ripped the iron bars right off, ha ha ha. I loved it. And, once again, the wolves deserve SO MUCH meat.
GOOD BOYS. They deserve big slabs of meat, the wolves. I'm eager to see how Henry and Geoffrey get out and if Haomath and Wolfgan can even get to them. Not to mention, what they're gonna do now. This is clearly a conspiracy. Does the king of the giants really not know what's going on? Is it really just the actions of a hateful rogue giant?
It's amazing how Wolfgan's little one instantly falls in love with Geoffrey. It's like he knows "This is my father's chosen one". Poor Geoffrey and his insecurities though. He still denies there is something more between him and Wolfgan and I wonder how he is going to explain himself out of this mess, if or when they are rescued. And whyyy do you terrorise me with this epic ciffhanger? T_T It is most unfair in my eyes! Joking about the unfairness btw, because it is you that decides if there will be one. Not me. Although I am serious about the dislike of that cliffhanger. Please update soon! I'm dying from the suspence, and also from my grammars. By the way, I read your other story, and am wondering which scandinavian language did you use for Hullian? It looked almost like norwegian, but not really. Anyways thank you for the update!
Thank you for updating this story! Thanks to that I was able to find it and enjoy reading it. It is so well written and well paced and I'd love to read more. <3
Henry! Has he been raising a frost giant's baby this whole time? Or is it his grandson? Why couldn't he escape with it? As terrible as it is that Geoffrey got caught, I'm glad that he actually found him.