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for Soul Survivor

by DeadLetterOffice

person rose
schedule September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Reuben is so sweet. Thank you for the double updates! I enjoyed, and cried, with them.
person Cyarsonix
schedule September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have to say whenever I think of these two I think of Ruben on top as he seems to have the more dominant personality. But the more I read the more I feel like I'm misjudging the positioning. Lol
person Sajo
schedule September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is so lovely! I was hesitant about reading this (post-apocalyptic settings are usually too heavy for me), but I'm glad I took the chance!
I love how the relationship between Jasper and Reuben has progressed. And as I kept reading, I felt nicely balanced between calm (the domesticity of farm life is so disarming) and dread (because the peace can only last so long in such times).
Thanks for sharing!
person Missy
schedule September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the updates. Glad to know Reuben's secret. I thought he might have had one of his abusers chained up and was slowly torturing him to death. I hope Clare and Mark make it.
person Cyarsonix
schedule September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I just wished it updated more. I'm more curious about future generations in these types of stories. And if there is someplace in Norwich than they could theoretically set up a route from the farm using the people in Norwich.
person livid fire
schedule September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter. reuben&j fit so well together:)
person Avernion
schedule September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I stuck with this story. I thought it started a little slow, but with every chapter it just grows more and more awesome. That I though it felt slow might even had nothing to do with the story but the mood was in when I began to read. I love how you slip in more and more mystery with every chapter. And that one lone kiss was so much fun, ha ha. Everything is just so awesome! I was really frustrated when I reached the end of chapter 6 and there was no more to read. Such a sad thing. I might have growled just a tiiiny little bit of frustration.
More please :3
person Missy
schedule September 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another well written chapter. I loved how tenderly Jasper treated Reuben during his confession. I can't wait for Reuben to reveal his secrets. Your post-apocalyptic setting is so creative and the challenges the characters face realistic. It's scary to imagine this really happening. Thank you for continuing the story.
person Mona Thompson
schedule September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love love love this story. You are an amazing writer. I am on the edge of my seat reading this and I cant wait for an update! I wanna know what Reuben is hiding...and what caused all the mayhem? Or the civilization's to crumble? Sorry if you went over that but I wanna know! Keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing your talent with us :)♥
person Squilliam Fancyson
schedule September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Mark is so funny i love him. Im really nervous about what kind of secrets rueben has laying around. He already has literal skeletons outside who knows whats in that room