This is such a nicely written story. I am in love with the characters and I am looking forward to reading more. The last chapter made me tear up and lose hope and it had my insides churning with dread. Please don't drop it, I'm dying to know what happens next. <3
I'm surprised with myself that I've never noticed this story before. Its really good and interesting, I will make sure to follow the updates in the future. The plot is a little bit slow and doesn't lead in a straight direction, but I guess that's fine for the beginning of the story. I feel that you plan to write more of it and build the story and characters even further than you already have, I'm sure it will be a good read.
Thank you for posting! Its awesome
Oh my gods! Im so fucking excited about the new update! I was so scared we were going to lose Reuben. I cant believe John's little brother was there and MARK!?! Woo hoo! If anyone was going to be involved in an uprising it would be Mark! And if Reuben felt better I cant decide if he would be the leader of the uprising or if he would have already found a quieter way for him and Jasper to get back to the farm to make sure Claire and the baby were okay. I have sooooo many questions! Sorry I get excited and want to know it all but I will wait for you to tell me! Oh! And I cant wait for Reuben to completely fuck jasper into the floor! So fucking hot! Pleeeease update soon! ♥