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for The Tale Of The Perverted Hero

by Veroz_Alpha

schedule March 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

So this is not actually a story but a script. So get a few other people, print out a few more copies and have yourself a fucking script reading.

this has to be the laziest writing I have ever seen. There is nothing in it but me: bla bla bla, her: bla bla bla, Rebecca : bla bla bla, some random name:bla bla bla. 

It’s unreadable. I don’t know how it got past the very little QC this place has. Oh this review is based on 15 segments or partial lines of the story, not sentences as there are no sentences in it. Then it just too hard to read and was doing my head in.

in a nut shell WHAT THE FUCK.?