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August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow
I seriously hope you will continue this story and won't abandon it. Its so promising. I already find myself dreading Tal's new life and empathize with his confusion and dread.
Pleaseplease pleeeeeeasee update again soon I was waiting for something interesting and new to start on the site <33
I seriously hope you will continue this story and won't abandon it. Its so promising. I already find myself dreading Tal's new life and empathize with his confusion and dread.
Pleaseplease pleeeeeeasee update again soon I was waiting for something interesting and new to start on the site <33
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August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I'll check something on the site when I saw your update!
I like the way you describer Tal's reaction, it told a lot about his character and his view. I find it more realistic and was able to understand him better than if he were to just get angry and start making trouble like the character in his situation usually would in this type of 'kidnapped plot'.
Thank you very much for the awesome update!
I like the way you describer Tal's reaction, it told a lot about his character and his view. I find it more realistic and was able to understand him better than if he were to just get angry and start making trouble like the character in his situation usually would in this type of 'kidnapped plot'.
Thank you very much for the awesome update!
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August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. Looking forward to reading more!
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August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love the details and characterizations. I'm very interested in seeing the rest of this play out! Keep up the great writing!