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Hello my dear!!! I ran across your story this morning and have since read through all that you have written. I wanted to let you know that you have a gift for writing and creating such detail that quite a few other authors lack. It's rare that I can get so involved in a story. I sincerely hope that you continue this because I would love to be apart of this adventure more. So here's motivation!!!! Hope to receive more soon!

Loved this update!
I really appreciate the way you consider how to describe scenes and thoughts in a way that would be more 'decorated' and 'tasteful'. It certainly makes everything seem much more delicate and interesting to read. Also, I highly recommend to really think deeply into what do you imagine to be the right path of this story. Because I don't really think that a love triangle is what this story needs, but anyway, you are the author, after all.
Thank you! keep up with the awesome work <3

Wonderful story, I quite like it. I really look forward to updates as well, I got really happy when I realised you'd be updating this frequently ^^

I have a couple of questions, One is how technologically advanced Tal's world is. I know from other chapters that the people of this world possess at least a prototype of firearms, and you've also included ovens in this newest chapter. So... In correspondence with this world, at what age (century, roughly) would the story take place? And how advanced was Tal's birth village then, since he knows a great deal of these modern appliances, but some not (fx he didn't recognise a gun).

Also, will we in future chapters find out the reason behind Tal's situation? As in, why was his village in particular (although I suspect it to be among many) raided?

Just wondering... Otherwise, a great story with wonderful writing. In case you doubt it, you do have readers that smile whenever they see a new chapter out.

I come to aff just to read your story and im not kidding . Thank u for fast updates :)

Yaaay, Seral kissed Tal! I love Seral! He's so nice and considerate and funny. He's a lovely person~~ It has to be terrible to see someone you care for romantically be forced into a sexual relationship with someone else. It'd be interesting to see how Seral interacts with Aren after this (if there even is any interaction--I only assume there might be because Seral takes care of the horses). Barely controlled rage, I'm sure.

:( I have no clue how any of them are going to get out of this one..

Oh Tal and Seral, I don't think certain people will approve of such a thing. Tsk, tsk. ; >

Yes! I am so happy they kissed!

I absolutely adore Seral. Fuck Aren and his creepiness. I ship Tal and Seral hardcore. I know Tal is going through a lot but I think it might help him if he has friends.

Oh Tal... :'[ Damn it, I know you tagged this story as Angst for a reason and this is probably just the beginning of his trials with Aren, but I hope he comes out of this without too much damage.
The dream-metaphor is nicely done! Sufficiently surreal and ominous. (Don't give up yet, Tal!)
Also, I am envious of your update pace haha OTL
((and oh gosh o///o thank you))

“Oh, they most of been so shiny from that woman, I thought weakly, no longer finding it beautiful.”

“My prayers fizzled out in my head, nothing but a pile of ashes blown away as quickly as they had appeared.”

“I could hear his voice, like silk, slide through the air and wrap around my neck like a noose.”

Wow! Some really awesome sentences! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next update. <3