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for Oasis

by B-Aless

person Vic
schedule September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Thanks for updating! I was so glad when I saw it pop up, and I almost considered reading it during class... but chose to wait till I got home. It was so worth the wait! Oh my gosh. Seral is such a sweetie. I'm freaking out over what Aren means with that whole shitty spiel about dominating or whatever, he should learn how to keep his hands to his stupid self. :P

Can't wait for the next one! Cheers.
person Vic
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was a little worried about all the nibbling Seral was doing... If any marks show up and Aren sees there will be problems. Hopefully he doesn't ask for Tal for a little bit. Thanks for the update, you rock!
person Lavi1443
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I picture myself sobbing when this wonderful lover will come to its unavoidable painful end.
person Sajo
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I really like how you write your smut. Hhheh. I'm happy for Tal (even if it's probably gonna be a short-lived peace)!
person ClownRaper
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! I love how Seral actually stopped to ask if it was okay to continue! He's so great! And I'm also very happy that Tal was able to choose, for once, what he wanted. And he definitely wanted him a piece of the horse boy. Now I'm a bit worried that they are going to be found out. Someone may have seen them together before they went inside Tal's hut. And Muriel is probably going to make her visit.

Also, what's the relationship between Pyre and Hase...?
person Moku_Sui
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm freaking about about them getting caught >.<
person Lavi1443
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I wonder what Aren is going to say when he sees the bruising.
person Moku_Sui
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...Really hate Jarl. And I'm honestly still not sure about Pyre...I feel like she'll backstab him the moment she'll benefit from it :/
person Sajo
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's really nice to see the friendship and understanding between Pyre and Tal!
But damn it, Jarl just had to ruin Tal's moment of peace... D:
person Gin
schedule August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
is there any stockholm syndrome in this story?!