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for Oasis

by B-Aless

schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aren's incredibly self absorbed. Beyond privileged status, just a disconnect from others. Really unappealing.

As always, IMO and thanks for continuing.
person Lala
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Even though this latest chapter revealed that Aren is a "real" person, I still think he is exactly what his mother named him: cold/ice. I don't like him and I don't think I ever will. He enjoys dominating people and I really hope Tal does not fall for him the way other slaves in other fiction fall for their masters. Stockholm Syndrome is real, ya'll. I want Tal to keep fighting. I have a dream that one day Tal will kick Aren's ass. It's my dream, don't ruin it... >__>
person rose
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I feel like Tal is going to become Aren's Oasis, the one to melt the ice in his heart. I don't know why but I always imagine how Tal and Aren would react to each other if they were both people of the same status living in a village together, and for some reason I always imagine Aren to be a much more happier, freer person. Tal would fall not only for Aren's look but his wit and humor as well, with Aren being clever and seductive but interested in Tal as well. Sorry for my little musings but I'm really enraptured by this story, looking forward to more!
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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schedule October 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really do get the feeling Aren has his own demons.
I fucking love this story btw... Always nice to find a gem every once in a while.
person Vic
schedule October 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Aren is so damn hot. I hate him, but man, he makes me tingly in all the right places! I'm glad you are back. I missed you and this lovely story. Can't wait to hear more! Cheers, mate.
person Shun
schedule October 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Could u please make Aren a little less anoying. I am desperately trying to love him but he is a total jerk.every time I hear him says pet i want to bang my head against the wall.Tal has a fucking name for fuck's sake! And I really cant accept seral as the main character. We dont need two cutie together. Atleast one should be cool and sexy. I guess I whine roo much. Really sorry I can't control myself :D
person Rose
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about everyone else...but having Aren chasing Tal around was hot >< As always I'm anxiously waiting for more :3
person Shun
schedule October 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I would prefer if aren were the seme but I enjoy your story anyway.good job :)
person Moon Whistler
schedule September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
More chapters please!!! ❤️❤️❤️