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November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter only made me dislike Seral in a whole new way. It's okay to be hard headed and get your ass beaten up for it, but it doesn't mean it's okay to also drag Tal down with you! Don't get others in trouble!!
And Tal doesn't even realize he is being used, again, by some other man. The fact that Seral in nicer than Aren doesn't mean that he is all pure and good.
I hate the men in this story! fuck them! Tal, turn straight!
And Tal doesn't even realize he is being used, again, by some other man. The fact that Seral in nicer than Aren doesn't mean that he is all pure and good.
I hate the men in this story! fuck them! Tal, turn straight!
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November 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
(͒ ॢ ›⚇‹ ॢ)͒୭♡ This is pig. Ususally, pig is a happy lil bean.
(͒ ॢ ᵒ̴̶̷̥́⚇ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ ॢ)͒୭ This is pig after reading sad stories.
(͒ ॢ ˃̣̣̥᷄⚇˂̣̣̥᷅ ॢ)͒୭ This is pig after reading Oasis.
Please don't make pig cry anymore, you blasted animal abuser.
(͒ ॢ ᵒ̴̶̷̥́⚇ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ ॢ)͒୭ This is pig after reading sad stories.
(͒ ॢ ˃̣̣̥᷄⚇˂̣̣̥᷅ ॢ)͒୭ This is pig after reading Oasis.
Please don't make pig cry anymore, you blasted animal abuser.
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow you'r story is so damn good.i fell in love with it and I know Seral is one of two main characters but he is kinda annoying.Aren is a much better main character no matter how much cruel he is
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
( ᵒ̴̶̷᷄ д ᵒ̴̶̷᷅ ) Why do you break my heart every time..?
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Aren is such a bitch in this story, I like him anyway, but I really wish for there to be some kind of a light in his dark personality, something that will make him more human.
I feel really sorry for Seral and Tal at this point. I hope the Tal won't break.
And I must admit, I find Tal and Aren's relationship beautiful in a way, I want to see it develop into something deeper. Am I a bad person for wishing for them to end up together? xD I just think that they suit each other far better than Tal and Seral.
I feel really sorry for Seral and Tal at this point. I hope the Tal won't break.
And I must admit, I find Tal and Aren's relationship beautiful in a way, I want to see it develop into something deeper. Am I a bad person for wishing for them to end up together? xD I just think that they suit each other far better than Tal and Seral.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You just love leaving us waiting for more after each chapter don't you? Great storyline so far. Do keep it up!
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October 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, a look into Aren's past! He...really is cold (true to his name), and I'm still iffy about him, but the fact that Tal makes him *feel* something - I like that very much! :9
Thanks for the updates!
Thanks for the updates!
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October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'll be frank. I really don't like flashbacks.they're like torture for me so I will wait till next chapter and then read two chapter together. Thank u for fast updates
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October 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this little excerpt. I have always enjoyed being able to connect with each character: the name of the wind books are my favourite precisely for that reason. I hope you make more of these little bits where we can delve into other characters and meet their histories more intimately than just them "saying" it in the text. <3 Thank you for the update. Can't wait until the next one!
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October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this update. So much. It's the type of chapters that just bring the taste out of the story more dramatically, I could say? I don't know if it even makes any sense.
I will surely find the following scenes with Aren much more interesting than before I got to know this deeper side of him.
Excellent writing by the way, you only get better and better in each chapter <3
I will surely find the following scenes with Aren much more interesting than before I got to know this deeper side of him.
Excellent writing by the way, you only get better and better in each chapter <3