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Aaaw that was so nice of u!!! XD And I 'squee' whenever I c a new chapter up, so its totally okeedokee!!! Also, I don't mind a bit of dark & angst at all, as long as I no somethin goodll happen n the near future! I'm sorry 4 the bizzar attitude towards tragedies- I've read 2 many & already deal w a bit of depression. As I read good stories I get very attached 2 the characters & worlds. If 1 or mor o my faves die- I tend 2 get 2 depresst 2 even continue reading that chap let alone the story :'( uhav NO idea how many authors I've requested 2 giv me a heads up if it was gonna b sad- so I can avoid or prep 4 the emotional trauma... Wow wen I reread that I sound dramatic!!! Plz don't hate me!!! I <3 u!!! Plz update again soon! Lol
Rukia

Oh dear, someone's a little clueless. That's gonna bite him in the end...maybe literally.

Holy shit! Is he the one marrying the king and his family knows? I cant wait! This is a great story...and you dont need to apologize for mistakes! Your grammer is fine and better than mine and English is my ONLY language! Update soon please! The king sounds fucking hott and its really sweet how he gave him a present♥

Poor Henry!

Yayyy another update!
Loved it! Thank you <33

I'm likin this story so far :-) I hope soon we'll find out wat Dali means & what the ends game 4 the king is(tho its pretty obvious 2 me). I hope Henry doesn't end up terribly hurt or traumatised by the end of it. I also wonder if Henry or the king will end up learning each others language, as that would eventually simplify things 4 every1 involved. Plz update soon!!!
Rukia

O & just 2 quiet my inner grammar teacher: past tense of ring is rang, not ringed. That was the only word mistake that bothered me( despite my shorthand my grammar remains on an OCD level. Lol. Also, could u possibly post answers 2 review questions either b4 or aftr the chapters, or on some forum that u name??? Por favor??? Kudasai??? Lol I am trilingual

Already a second chapter! Lucky! I really like this story. It's so intriguing, and I hope to read more of it. Thank u so much!

Very interesting start. I think Diana knows more than she's letting on, and that henry is taking her place. Can't wait to read more!!!

Wonder why they are treating him weird.