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by stein1914

person Lavi1443
schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whhhattt voodoo don't end this story! Like, ever! Its so cute and I actually smile every time I see a new update.
Boohoo
Maybe write part 2? *winkwink* ;)
schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Henry, he is so clueless.
person Missy
schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. I love how innocent and naïve Henry is.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
One and a half foot tall??? That's really not that big. Is that a typo??? If not what was the harm??? Plz update soon!!!
Rukia
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! I just read the forum reply, thats so sweet of u!!! Im glad we got the same preference 2ward tragedies. And lol, as the author its all up 2 u if u wanna go back & make Henrys kingdom matriarchal- it tickls me that u like my idea!!! I wonder wat hoameth took out o Henry's room(if it WAS him, lol). O man did u take that giant thing from Lokis strory from Thor!?!? Lmbo!!!
Rukia
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think henry may be wishing up a bit. I suspect that his brother, who seemed to be the only somewhat affectionate one to henry, may not know what's going to happen. And he may have some words to say when it does. Not sure if the king knows that henry has no clue what's going on. I suspect he doesnt, as he seems like a good guy, and is being duped by henrys father. Great story, keep it coming!
person Tahn
schedule August 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Someone really, really needs to tell him. If ANY of his family care for him at all, they need to tell him.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaait... Is Henry's kingdom matriarchal perhaps??? Henry's father seems really cold to his only present/existing(?) son??? So I just wondered if mor valiew was put on girls n ther society(4 my terrible shorthand I got impressiv vocab). Also, just HOW NAÏVE IS HENRY??? How hasn't it occurred 2 him that the king's paying WAY 2 much attention 2 him & NONE 2 his sister????? Also- is the king in on the trick, or does he think poor Henry is completely aware of what's happening around him??? Plz answer!!! My heads spinnin!!! And dont 4get 2 update;-)
Rukia
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, poor henry. He has no idea what his family has done. I'm anxious for when he figures it out. I'm sure he'll be terribly hurt by their betrayal. Checking every day for updates!
person Lavi1443
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, though, I believe that the truth should be revealed soon. I really can't wait to see how the relationship between the two mc develops.