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by stein1914

person miles
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was great ! I read it in one go and that's a pity it's too short... But I saw there's going to be a sequel ! So exciting ! Can't wait !
:)
schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dagnabbit, Henry, why couldn't you have just asked what Dalikath meant, instead!??? Now he thinks he's going to be the side dish forever. This is so frustrating. I started reading this story on the best and most frustrating update ever, ha ha.
schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just read this whole story over again. I love the differences of both countries. I like how they treat him in Hull. I know that Henry's feeling homesick, but Hull could be so much better than his home. Yeah, it's freezing cold, but it's full of such warm, kind people that are fiercely loyal to one another. Not to mention that his family hasn't even come forward with the truth to him!! Hull will be a much better home to him, and the entire fortress could be his new family.
person Mona Thompson
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well goddamn. You sure can write a sex scene! I cant wait to see how his family acts now that he knows the truth! Update soooooon please ♥
person lundbera
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I mean...if I had to marry a sexy hunter king instead of going back to lies, I totally would. This story is great! Looking forward to your next update.
person Lavi1443
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just imagine Haomath scratch his head and trying to figure outvwhat the fuck has gone wrong now?!? xD
person fartoolazytologin
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
omg poor Henry. He has no idea whats going on. I honestly want him to like Haomath but since some people (>.>) like to get all aggressive in the woods, I'm figuring that such a thing would take quite a while. The suspense is killing me I wanna get to the hanky panky. And I wanna see how Henry reacts when gets drop-kicked by ye old truthington and sees how sucky his parents really are for pulling this stunt. I'm ready for the nitty gritty update soon
person fartoolazytologin
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH the hanky panky indeed ahem Im very interested in seeing how Henry will go about confronting his family about this. Especially Diane seeing as she seemed upset in earlier chapters and I can only assume it was because her brother was being sold off like produce at the market. Henry's parents will be interesting to deal with as well as they actively pretending that everything was fine and normal and going just as it should be which is majorly phuq'd up. I'm hoping that karma gives them the royal treatment after all of this. As for Henry's brother, i'm pretty sure hes completely unaware of everything that going on, much like henry himself was initially.
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn, i'm glad to see Henry wasn't traumatized.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Such a good chapter. Keep going :)