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by stein1914

person kylee123
schedule August 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was a delightful story. Such a pleasure to find.  Very nicely written chapters. I felt a touch of sadness for Henry but hopeful for the future as well. I am going to jump into Karma next.  I hope I will see Henry and Haomath again.

person Anonymous
schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It was lovely. I would have liked more abut their lives as husbands and with the child but other than that, it was really good!

person Moku_Sui
schedule December 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I went to check what other stories you wrote.
person dalian
schedule September 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I enjoyed reading it, thnks. Looking forward to the next one.
person Semaya
schedule September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story! I think this story could be made into a long one as well but it definitely works as a prequel. Is the other story going to be M/M as well? I hope it is :)
person Tahn
schedule August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, so it's a prequel huh? Any idea what the main story is gonna be called? I look forward to it. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
schedule August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. I hope they can be happy together. Xoxo Robin
schedule August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your story. I'm looking forward to reading your future works. I won't be mad if you write another story where Henry's father needs his help and he makes them pay for their deceit.
person Thirdly
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YES! Friggin yes! I will wait as long as necessary to read about Wolfgan!!! And I like the idea of the Henry cameo! This is just...I love it so much. I'm glad you have more in store for this 'world.' And I underestimated Henry. I thought he had confused what his position truly was, but in reality he was aching over his family's betrayal. That makes so much more sense now. Gosh, it was just such a good read. I definitely have to read it over a good few times until you start working on Wolfgan's tale.
person Lavi1443
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure that every time you see another comment from me, you facePalm yourself and wonder what does this dude have to say now!
Welllll If you have any intention of posting another story with the same background and 'theme' as Frost then I am very sorry to tell you, but you'll just have to suffer more for a little while longer! HAHAHA
BECAUSE
I love this story, it was awesome, and if you say that it wasn't nearly as well written as what you are currently engaging yourself with, then I'm thrilled to put my eyes on your bigger, more impressive story.
Let me tell you this- I enjoyed every moment of frost. Even though it was short compares to other internet-stories-something-of-that-sort, it didn't feel rushed at all, like you feared. It was developing nicely and was logical enough to simply be good.

Always remember, that, if people actually like your work, they can wait. Real-Life comes first; I wish you luck on your finals and hope you'll get the results you hoped for.
It was amazing to follow your project on Frost, thank you for that.


Lavi1443