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I really  like  this  story! Your  a really  good  storyteller. I hope you   continue  writing. Good luck  

I have read this before, but I read it again, just in case. The story seems a bit too fast for me. Like it jumps from her being a warrior, to slave to pregnant wife really really fast. There's no character development, there should be more time between meeting, screwing, and pregnant, but I'm strange and like story more than porn. I was interested in her as a warrior, so it bugs me that she just suddenly becomes a willing sex slave. She should fight harder than that, maybe show her over time growing to love him. Stuff like that. I'm glad that the Prince doesn't view the women as sex toys, cuz that really bugs me. This story isn't really my thing, but I know there are others that this would appeal to more.