That was hot, can't wait till Ryn gets into it too
more, more, more, MORE... pretty please haha
Hahahahaha what a dilemma! Can't wait to read more , plllleeeaaase write longer chapters!!
Loved this chapter. It must be my warped sense of humor, but I find it humorous that Ryn, his wolf and Svet are all tied together by the situation and each of them despise the other with Ryn's wolf leading the charge by claiming Svet as his.
Wonderful writing and looking forward to their future adventures and what you have planned for them. Shelley
This chapter was great. I've never heard of or read about "dhampir's so your story is a wonderful introduction for me to learn more about them. Svetlana is a wonderful character and your storyline is thrilling, suspenseful and nail-biting at the same time. I love that you are writing again and look forward to reading more of your future chapters when you have the time to write them. --- Shelley
So Ryn's wolf was never wholeheartedly into Ryn's beloved. What does this mean for Svetlana? Things are heating up and I'm really enjoying reading their story. -- Shelley
Great story, loving the fast paced writing and her quick wit! But when are we getting some action??
FYI - The last chapter is a duplicate
This is so good! And I really like the female lead. Can't wait for more!
I love Burning Brightly and was hoping that you might finish it. You are a great writer and I'm glad to see that you have not stopped writing. --- Shelley