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for Burning Brightly

by XxBreakinKnucklezxX

person MonaMina
schedule September 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love this so far...please update soon❤️

person Shelley
schedule May 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Congratulations on your beautiful baby girl.  I'm so happy for you and no more horrible pregnancy side effects.  But I think now you will be very busy loving your baby so please don't apologize if we have to wait a little longer to read your wonderful story.  I completely understand.  But I am curious as to what will happen now that Allistar has introduced himself to her and what will happen to her now that they have let her go.

Chapter 12  ---  Shelley

person Shelley
schedule May 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hi,  I'm so sorry I didn't realize that you had updated your story and I missed seeing chapter 11.  I also had to make an account in order to leave a a review, but your writing is well worth doing so.  This story is a favorite of mine and I'm happy you were able to find the time to add to your book.

I was glad to see that the Orc's were letting her go.  But where will she go now?  And what about Ryn and his beast, this is not good.  And finally if she is pregnant, what will she do now?

Great chapter 11.  ---  Shelley

person Anonymous
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You are most welcome :) thanks for sorting out the whole flashback thing in the next chapter, hahahaha I love this story so far and clearly got ahead of myself!

Sorry haven't gotten back sooner, I wasn't well at all but I'm back and hoping you update really really soon!!

person lividifire
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

wow, this is good:))

there are lots of cliche's but I like it so far.

Im very excited to read more.

person Shelley
schedule October 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So she's back in her prison, but who is this girl that gave her food?  And where is Ryn?  I'm so looking forward to reading more of your story, but I understand that it's difficult for you right now.  So I can wait -- your story is just too good for me to give up reading and I'm excited to know that once you have finished it, I can re-read it from start to finish.

Shelley ---  Chapter 9

person Shelley
schedule October 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is getting exciting now.  It's an intriguing chapter as you unfold the mystery of the orcs, her and the lycans.  Also whether or not she's pregnant and since she was gang raped, who's could it be.

Great chapter 10.  ---  Shelley

person Anonymous
schedule October 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This was a flashback, wasn't it? Of when she met the Wolf for the first time? Is it is it is it? :) :)

Even if it's not I'm so excited about this story, please update weekly if you can!

person Anonymous
schedule October 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

How sad that you've just abandoned this after such a promising start :(

person Anonymous
schedule October 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is definitely my favorite story on the website!! Here's hoping that you update soon and with longer chapters :)