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To Angel... I agree about the parent-doctor confidentiality law but you have to take into consideration that this is fiction and not that I know what's going through the author's mind but presuming that since this is world-building, with things like humonsters and jet cars and high tech systems, chances are things like medical confidentiality and HIPAA law, which exists in reality, probably DO NOT exist here. Besides, even in reality, not all countries recognize this nor follow it religiously in case it is recognized.

To the author... this is an interesting concept. I love the idea and will certainly look forward to this from now on.

Ohhhh nooooo, I just started reading this and caught up today and I'm so sad that I caught up hahaha. You've created a fantastic story and I'm eager to see the rest of it. I'm a silent reader so I don't leave reviews, but please please know that I am always waiting for your updates and very eagerly absorbing everything.

Oh, wow! I'm so, so happy I gave this story a try. It's seriously good! Lot's of action, twists galore, an adorable main couple, an awsome main character, a dash of sci-fi... and mpreg! *happy dance* Dear author, you have just made my day! Heck, my whole month! *bow* Thank you! :-)

I THINK I know what's happenin here: Grey's dad is goadin alsch 2 try 2 provoke him 2 anger, a way 2 test their sons choice of lover(2 c if he's violent or a traitor). Since the servant turnd out a mole he has doubts of evry1 close 2 grey. Am I close???:-) Hope u update soon & let me know!!! Do u reply 2 reviews anywhere???
Rukia

Wonder if he's gonna tell them they didn't do anything in the bathroom?

Oh sweetness!!! Man w each update I get mor anxious 2 find out when alsh will tell grey the big news!!! And how hell react!!! Plz put me out of my misery soooon!!!
Rukia

If he's not careful he's gonna lose that baby before he gets a chance to tell him.

Oh boy, while the impatient part of me kind of just wants the simple cute love story, the other part of me totally understands stories taking on a life of their own. :/ It's up to you. Maybe write a few chapters ahead and see if you like the direction it's heading versus what you originally had in mind?

Oh man! So much 4 break-in the news!!! Well at least the bad guys didn't get grey. I sincerely hope he can man up when it comes 2 him being a daddy. Also I must say: Grey's catatonic reaction 2 fear is more symptomatic of trauma, than just high anxiety or paranoina- as if he had something horrible happen 2 him 2 cause him 2 shut down when faced w emergencies. Plz update soon!!!
Rukia

What kind of life is this...poor Greysons, but it is getting interesting. I'm going to take a guess and say Grey finds out Alsch is preggo before Alsch has a chance to tell him?