AFF Fiction Portal
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thirdly!! You're back!! :)

Loved this chapter!

Kids can be so cruel, can't they? I'm glad Kane, even at just four years of age, was able to show them all up! :) I'm actually surprised Gyro admitted Kane was his best friend. I guess he never thought his friends would sort of make fun of him.

Looking forward to the next installment! :)
person Tahn
schedule August 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So cute, sleep kisses. Can't wait for that conversation.
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who of Gyro's family was trying to listen in on his and Kane's conversation. Could that person be the one who stole the sword?

Excellent chapter, Thirdly! :)
person Tahn
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww widdle Kane is adorable. Is this story gonna be a series of different adventures, or is it gonna have a main plot, or both?
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The notes to Gyro and Kane from Grandmother Glen really had me choked up.

I love reading the flashback scenes. Kane was so adorable when he was little. Adorable and smart! :)

I'm looking foward to finding out how G&K will solve the missing sword crime.

Oh, and I'm thrilled Gyro is ok! :)
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, Thirdly!!

I'm hooked!

Gyro better be all right! Kane can't lose him now.

I love the fact that they're so young (especially Kane), and they run a detective agency. Way cool. lol

I'm anxiously awaiting chapter two. :)
person Tahn
schedule July 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, can't wait to see where this is going.