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Ok, let me just correct my previous comment. I've been trying to understand Prax's feelings and realized that there is nothing surprising at all on his actions when he finally knew of Bion's feelings. That he was just awaken from a feeling he's been feeling all along and was just blind to see it. Sorry, I just want to let that out 'coz it's been bothering me. With that said, I hope I could move on from this story now, well, atleast until the sequel. (If there would be one at all) ;)

Thank you again for sharing such a great story! :)

Wow! That was a beautiful read. I enjoyed reading this very much! I was just surprised at how accepting Prax is towards his own feelings for Bion when he knew of the other's feelings towards him. Well I know he feels that tug from the very beginning, but maybe he's just tired of fighting it off and come on, who wouldn't fall for sweet Bion? ;) I wish to read more of Prax and Bion, I love this two so much I can't let them go just yet. Pls write more! I like your style and I'm looking forward to read more from you.

I read this and really enjoyed your style. There was just enough detail that kept me engaged yet didn't big me down. The characters were great. I love Bion and Prax very much and I loved that look into their family life.

I had trouble figuring out when you change narrators. Sometimes it was Bion and sometimes it was Prax. The pronoun "he" can be over used in gay romances. You may need to find a way to help your reader differentiate who the character is sooner for your audience.

Other than that, the sex was hot! I hope you continue to add your fictions to AFF for others to read!!!

I wish you had added an epilogue telling us if they survived and were happy together. I hope they made it. Loved the story, good job :D

I had to read the whole thing straight through; this story's written in a very engaging style! I'm not sure how to explain it, but the writing is also very...peaceful, in a way. And, good god, the UST was beautifully drawn out!
Really great job! :)