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August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YES !! Thank you. Sorry if I keep repeating myself but I can feel the emotion in your writing. I asked on your page if Lucas was still alive. Keep going.
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Jeezus girl. Someone needs something really bad happening to their nether bits, and possibly knees and elbows.
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Glad to see that she was able to finally tell someone else what happened to her. Nice to see that she is not afraid to touch Sam. Nice cliffhanger of her getting ready to kiss Sam.
Now it would be really great if something evil (SAM and the Twins) happened to Lucas.
We will only find out where this great story is going. Keep up the great work.
Now it would be really great if something evil (SAM and the Twins) happened to Lucas.
We will only find out where this great story is going. Keep up the great work.
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July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well done on telling her story. I applaud the bravery of her telling it. Hopefully letting others know will help her heal.
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July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter: 1.
Overall good. Slight consistency on the daughter, Ella mentioned four years, and but later, the daughter was described as being three.
Overall good. Slight consistency on the daughter, Ella mentioned four years, and but later, the daughter was described as being three.
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July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Like I have previously said - I can feel the emotions. Now how did she lose the baby?
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July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
@DA I read this chapter while waiting to see if they were going to let me take the rookies out into the rain again. Really enjoyed te chapter. Glad to see that she is telling someone the whole story about why see is afraid of men to touch her except Evan. Can not wait for the next chapter to see what happened to the baby. Did the parents make her lose to child to save their face in he neighborhood or did the prick beat her up so bad that she lost the baby. Hope that the twins and Sam can help her heal. Loved the name of the twins. Now lets hope that Sam is not hurt to bad or both Carrie and Elly will really be upset and Lill willl never forgive her father for not coming back to her like he told her he would.
Again keep up the great work. Cliffhangers and all.
Now I am going to read DP's stories.
Wish I could rate the story higher than a five but tha is all it will let me do.
Again keep up the great work. Cliffhangers and all.
Now I am going to read DP's stories.
Wish I could rate the story higher than a five but tha is all it will let me do.
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July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so sad.
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July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
@DA. Another great chapter, cliffhanger and all. Sory she lost her cell phone that she liked so,much. Let me guess that Sam is based on someone in your life that we all know so well. Love the way that you and him use the same names of people in each other's stories.
Question. Will Carrie or Kari(name in the write up) ever tell Sam why she is afraid to be touched by men,and when she does is Sam going to do anything about it. Guess we will have to wait to see. Will be waiting more from you and Magus. Keep up the great writing.
Question. Will Carrie or Kari(name in the write up) ever tell Sam why she is afraid to be touched by men,and when she does is Sam going to do anything about it. Guess we will have to wait to see. Will be waiting more from you and Magus. Keep up the great writing.
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July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
very welk written. I can feel the emotion. Keep going.
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