rate_review Reviews

This was a wonderfully awesome sequel. I love the twist at chapter 3 because it made the story even hotter and lewder

This is getting really good! The way you describe it, it's as if you were actually there and you bring the reader with you!

This is fantastic! The whole sibling love concept is so hot and the way you portray it, it's so beautiful and natural. Bravo!

Alittle bit of a suprise but well done. Looks like the material for a continuing series has been laid.

I'm at a big water park today, my daughter and her friends are off on rides, and I'm chilling on a plastic chair under a big umbrella, feet away from other bored parents beneath the same umbrella. I pull up AFF on my phone and start reading this story.

I creamed myself. Halfway through chapter 3, I jizzed in my swim shorts. Never touched myself once. I haven't done that in well over 10 years.

Standing belly clap, my friend. That is some quality smut you've written here. Congratulations!

Your stories are so good! Reminds me of my childhood.

Damn man! That was great! But way to go and end it right when it was getting hot. ;-)
Man, that's gonna be an awkward conversation, trying to explain to Astrid and Erik that not only are they not disgusted, but seriously turned on ;-). Knowing you though, I know you'll make it amazing :-)
Please hurry and post the rest of this soon
Joma