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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You have improved so much. This was great! I didn't guess the ending, which is a sign that you kept the suspense and intrigue going right up until the final few lines. Well done!
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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy hell. That was fucking great! It reminds me of those fucked up amazing shows Tales From The Darkside..if you havent seen them check out some episodes...theres a movie too! You did a good job!