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Lol, the difference between Napa Valley and Boones Farm. I hate to admit, but I used to love Boones Farm. lol

Lance seems like such a nice guy. Erik should really give him a chance even though he's physically not his type. I'm sure if he likes Lance's personality, his looks will get better. Funny how that works. lol

Very cool. Love that Erik is just so normal (and we get that in the prologue). How on earth do you manage to write so much and get so many updates out on time? I am amazed and say at least very very jealous of you right now. I can't even finish bloody chapter 6 of my own story.

Anyway back to Erik, I can't wait to see how this goes, you just write so well that you immediately know what the people are like. Love your stuff thank you!

Hugs Aduial

Great start. You had me hooked from the begining. Poor Erik, he seems to have some insecurites about himself. My fav part is the refrence to The Fresh prince if bel aire. I loved that show! Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.

Ahhaha, I love the way you wrote chapter one. His point of view is hilarious.I can't wait to read more.

Don't know what kind of inspiration you use for your stories,but it works. I love it. Bree seems like a good friend I like her. Erik probably thanked his roommate's exibition for that. The new charactor, Lance, not sure what to think of him, he seems to want a relatioship with Erik. Maybe he should give him a chance. You never know what might happen. Don't judge a book by its cover and all. Anyway can we have another chapter please?

ch2

Wow I hope he's supposed to be written as a complete dick at this stage

I just read this again and I have to say,it was better the second time. I think I can relate to poor Erik. Maybe he is being a little picky? This started of so good, I patiently await your next chapter.