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Aww, come on. The guy's hot. You need to get your high expectations shattered dude. Seems like he was into you too. It'd be really funny if he saw you get manhandled by the cops though.

That made me laugh because the thing about expectations is sooo true. I met James Marsden once, he's very nice but very short and I'm just average height, so I was wondering how short all the other people in films are. Erik definately needs Bree to tell him to get his head out of his butt though because like he said himself he isn't exactly perfect but he seems to have an unrealistic view of what his BF should be like. :D

I try to review ASAP now :D since you don't mind my jet lagged hogwash.

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I didn't expect to like this story this much. Usually first person narrations are dull and repetitive. Your dry humor is what renders this story fun to read and the characters likeable. A good start, I'll waiting for more ;)
(Also I'm glad Erik is not the Greek Adonis... But a much real person -character? - from Earth.)

Ah but you're stuff is amazing, not just something you pound out. Anyways, poor Erik, Regina is mean...even if you think that, it was bitchy to say that to him. Saw something smart on the internet (indeed such things exist) about a teacher giving the kids tubes full of pastes and thing and telling them to empty it out. And after they'd done that, telling them to put it back in which obviously doesn't work, lesson to be learned out of that, its the same with words, lots of stuff will come out but you can't but its much much harder to put it back in.

I'm an flight attendent, so there are regular trips to unfortunatly the less pleasant countries of this world, missed this update cause I was stuck in Teheran again....fun times, since AFF is blocked for "religious reasons". Hope I'm not to late with my review. Loving it.

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I really like this story! It's really funny and I actually kinda liked the prologue. I'm really excited for him to meet his man :)

I LOVE Erik's mom!!!! She is the BEST!!!!!

Erik's coming out story was pretty funny. :)

I think Erik's mom is absolutely right; he might not find Mr. Perfect, but he might find the guy that's perfect for him.

Oh, and did the whole calendar hunks bar thingy already happen? Was it that past weekend? I was hoping you'd write about it... :)

Hehe, I love the way he came out, it really fits him and was funny. :D I am getting a vibe that he's picky because he's self conscious. I'm hoping he'll find someone to "fix" that. I know someone that seems willing to try, if he'd just let him.

Seriously do you ever stop writing? I keep telling myself that I'm not going to start reading any new storys and then you go and post something new. Erik seems funny so far but he may get annoying real fast. I hope not but eh you never can tell. Another good start.

What's wrong with Bree? But I guess she is just trying to be a good friend to Erik. How dare she touch his wanking material though. How cool is his mother? I like her. A understanding person. Keep up with the good stuff.

Prologue:

OMG, CL - you really outdid yourself this time!!!!

This is freakin' hysterical!!!! Gay Where's Waldo? Omg, this whole chapter had me peeing in my pants. ;)

I love this guy already (Erik, I'm assuming?) - he is so funny. Five pounds, ok, more like twenty. hehe

Ok, on to chapter one. :)