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I ship lance and erik!! Idk I'm feeling them!

It was raining men! Ha! That was a good one! :)

I really like Graham!! But...I sense Lance won't want just a one-night stand, or even an fwb. I think he'll want to see Erik again.

Wonder what Erik will do...it's tough deciding between two hot guys (Lance is hot, right? Of course we know Graham/Thor(was that his stage name?)was hot. :)

The chapter was funny to read! Love the characters: they are really well developed. It seemed a bit short but I really enjoyed the dynamics. Usually first person perspectives get on my nerves since the writing tricks used get old after mony reads, but with your story I just forget about the writing style. I can't focus on the style because my attention is pulled into the storyplot. Really well done.

hi i love the story and i ship gramm eric very much graam is already smitten to eric it is so cute i bet it is love at first sith with graam i soooo want you please to write some revengee on the asshole police mens muhahah nothing is sweeter than revenge or shoul i said it payback is a bitch :)

Hell yes Lance is rude, I'd have left already if he ignored me like that! Thankfully Erik didn't and met Graham which is amazing. Just back from Portugal, which was amazing, and then I get another chapter from you so my life is complete right now. ;).

I can't wait for more Matt and Payne and well Justin and Zeb and Shane...because they're mixing now and I love them all. Hugs all around

Aduial

Loved the chapter, CL! :)

I LOVE the Thad/Graham's uncle! He's so nice to pass on Erik's number to his nephew. lol

I really like Graham; I know he'd be so much better for Erik than Lance.

Hehe, "Graham" is hot. And yeah, Lance is being a bit of a dick. I find all of Graham's accidents funny, yeah he "accidentally" spilled something right on his crotch, then happily bent to clean it up. Riiiiight.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I almost think if would have been worse if he'd been drinking something and spewed it out across the table. I almost, ALMOST feel sorry for Lance but if I know you you'll have him hooked up before we know it! But I am totally digging on the whole almost kiss and the Uncle razzing Gram... ALTHOUGH it's kinda creepy the whole uncle thing.... ANYWHO GOOD LUCK TO YOU IN GETTING YOUR STORY PUBLISHED! OH and let me know if you get it done in graphic novel I'd love to buy that! Thank YOU for updating I hope RL get's better for you!

Oh man, poor Erik! I don't know which was more devastating for him - having two guns pointed at him, and then handcuffed, or realizing that Mr. Dreamboat December, Thad (that's his name, right? Thad?)is shorter than him! lol

I actually thought he would show up just as Erik was thrown to the ground and handcuffed. lol


Oh, I almost forgot - maybe even more devastating is finding out Bree has been seeing someone, and it sounds serious!!! What would Erik do without Bree around to guide him?

WOW and once again you've blown my mine with another fantastic story! I love this one... I feel for Lance in a way though I hope if nothing else he finds someone good! OH and I love Bree! I think we're all fag hags in our own ways! Anywho thank YOU for sharing I look forward to reading what happens to Erik...