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for Strip Me Bare

by CL.Mustafic

schedule September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey, CL! I just started reading chapter 9, but I thought I'd write first before I forget. You used the name 'Chase' instead of 'Chance'. Wasn't that Graham's July calendar guy friends? Chance?
schedule August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaaaaaaaah, this is so friggin good. I freaked out more than if I was watching a drama when Graham turned out to be the temporary waiter and even before that, when he urged him on stage. And I laughed so hard when he called Chase Mr. July. Lordy, I wonder how much trouble he'll get into if Graham finds out he wasn't the only calendar man Erik was fapping to. I'm just DYING to read more.
person Tahn
schedule August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And he finally shows his Dom side. Kinda hot really.
person Tahn
schedule August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God at the cute!!!
schedule August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I so love Graham! lol The whole conversation with him and Chance was funny.


But I have to say, Erik's inner musings are hysterical. I was cracking up throughout the chapter. :) Especially the part where Erik's wondering how on earth Graham is going to drive a motorcycle when he's such a klutz in the restaurant! lol
person Tahn
schedule August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So much awkward! Come on dude, pull yourself together man. Your favorite little stripper has the hots for you. Go for it!
schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I actually thought Lance was really sweet, telling Erik he was so adorable and cute and then making him breakfast. But Lance was right; everyone looks in a different mirror when they're looking at themselves. Erik is just too hard on himself, and I'm sure he looks just as adorable as Lance says he is. :)

And after all, Graham is after him now too. He can't be that bad! lol
person Jetfire
schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i love grahams texts, its totally adorably geeky for a hot guy. Erik need someone to know more sense into him than a squishy american football...a good old cricket ball to the head would do the trick I think.

I hope Bree manages to do it, because hell he needs it.

Hugs Aduial
person Tahn
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You know you wanna see Graham, you know you do.
person Jetfire
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Erik is a little bit stupid but its fine, he's male we forgive him. Plus there was sex so I'm just going to do my happy dance.

If you go to Portugal go to Porto not Lisbon, Lisbon is full of tourists and annoying people selling sunglasses and shit every 5 meters. TAKE CARE

Hugs Aduial