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CL!!!!! You've been posting so many chapters of this I haven't had time to read them yet. I had to go back and reread some chapters to re-familiarize myself with the story.

I reread chapter eight - which was probably just as hysterical or more hysterical than the first time I read it. lol Erik it just too cute and funny for words! :)

Now I'm gonna reread chapter nine until I catch up. :)

Chapter ten: I find it amazing that Graham knows just what Erik needs, and Erik has no clue. And the dom Graham seems so different from the bumbling, clumsy waiter Graham.

Terrific chapter, CL! :)

Chapter eleven: Wow, there's even a list! It's funny, I never paid attention to it before, but I noticed with the writing of D/s, the dom is capitalized, and the sub isn't. I can see where Erik would think the subs are less of a person than the doms.

I've read some stories that had to do with D/s, and the subs get into this subspace or something, a little like a trance. I have a submissive personality to an extent, but there's no damn way I'd be sitting by someone's feet and wearing a collar. Personally, I think of that as demeaning. But to each his own, right? lol

Chapter twelve: I finally caught up, CL! :)

Bree is very opinionated, and she has a special kind of relationship with Erik. It's only natural that she doesn't want him changing his personality for some guy he just met. In her eyes Graham is very controlling, well, in my eyes too, lol, but she's only looking out for her best friend's interests.

Oz is great though; he just goes with the flow and makes the best of things. :)

I wonder why Graham always has to run somewhere. If he has to work at the restaurant or get ready to strip (lol!), then why doesn't he just say so?

Great chapter, CL! :)

Oh this is gonna be a fun learning experience I'm sure.

This story is awesome! I love how you've introduced BDSM here, especially with the dynamic between the two characters. Erik is adorably awkward like...all the time, which makes him a little bit more 'real'. Thank you for posting! I look forward to the next post of this and The Heart Wants!

Im loving this story, when are you going to continue writing more chapters?

and i think the relashionship between graham and eric will be exslucive to each other so i though their first time should be special with candeles romantic and of course bareback without condoms obiously they like eachother very much their sex life should be without barriers i have an idea that before they do anal sex maybe they should both go together to do hiv check to make sure they both see and trust eachother 100% you can never be safe with only words!!

hello love the story i want to ask you a hard question that i think about in the mbti personallty what do you think is graham is ? esfp maybe?

Oohh, that Chance/Chase is a troublemaker, huh? lol

It's so obvious Erik sees a completely different person when he looks in the mirror than everyone else sees.

Graham seems like more of a take-charge person than he did from his texts.

Looking forward to the next chapter, CL! :)