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for Strip Me Bare

by CL.Mustafic

person anon~ish
schedule September 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

WHOA that was some BLUE BALLING MELEE SHIT!  Poor Eric I feel for the poor bastard!  I mean I know he's not really real but still THAT'S JUST FUCKED UP!  I hope Graham has a SUPER UBER EXCUSE!   I mean I'm thinking it's like his Sister or some shit but......  I think Eric has every right to tell Graham to kiss his pretty ass and make it UP to him big time!  Thank YOU for updating!

person Tahn
schedule September 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Man, Erik's junk is gonna fall off at the serious case of blue balls he's been sporting this entire story.

person pip
schedule September 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay! You updated!

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Aaaand, you are the worst tease in the world! No, the cheesecake is not enough. Poor Erik!

Gods, I was drooling right along with him. Stripped + Cheesecake... bliss :) I'm so glad you updated this. Erik is going to be torturing himself now over that "sweetheart" comment.

person Coral
schedule September 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved this chapter and what this could mean for Eric and Graham and their relationship. I also can't wait to see what happens next and to find out what is going on with Graham and what the emergency is. I also love how dramatic and sassy Eric is. I absolutely love it :D.

person Lunar
schedule May 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please update this, I still read the other stories you write but this one is my favorite of the bunch and it's been a while since the last updatw :(
person Tahn
schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Nikola and Gage! I hope that Dom doesn't come back at some point. I wonder what is gonna happen in the basement???
person pip
schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I greedily read all the other chapters at once the other day, even though I meant to review each one. This chapter was a little darker. I don't know if that's the last we'll see of that Shamus bloke. Gits have a habit of turning up. But I am loving the interactions between Erik and Graham. Awesome!
schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Shamus -- what a jackass! Thank God HE won't be back! I was like Erik; I think I threw up a little in my mouth when I read about the pissing scene. Ugh and ewwwwwww. lol I am proud of Erik for not panicking and just taking off once Shamus got off him. :) Now, I wonder what he will see downstairs? lol
person pip
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Prologue CL, this is great. You made me laugh out loud a few times there, and I'm relaxed in the company of your main character. It's a device I've seen before, but you do it better than anyone else. Great writing. Now going on to chapter one... Thanks :)
person pip
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one - Well, I am intrigued, even if Erik isn't. Seems as if he knew he'd be in that bar... Again, brilliant writing, and I adore the humour in this fic.